Writing Copy

What you say is the next most important thing – next to who you say it to. The copy has one purpose: to motivate a specific person, to do a specific, now. Does your client have a product to sell? Then close the sale. Do they have a product/service that requires more information or contact in order to close the sale? Then motivate their customers to start the process with a request for more information, a free quote or consultation. You should understand what it will take to make a sale, and then move them toward that process.

 

It’s all about The Offer, The Benefit, The Close and the Call to Action!

 

You must communicate the urgent need of a product or service. You want to make an emotional appeal to the one person who needs what is being sold. (Even though it may be a mass mailing, you are communicating with just one person, not the masses.)

 

Determine the unique benefits that this product or service provides. Avoid product features that don’t communicate benefits.

 

Features justify price. Benefits make up value. Value justifies a purchase.

 

Once you’ve identified the major benefit, use it to repeat the offer. As you close, tell them what you want them to do. What will happen if they don’t act right now? If you’re selling, ask for the sale. Tell them again, with benefits, why they should act now. Sweeten the deal with a FREE offer and alleviate their worry with an unconditional money-back guarantee. Finally, call them to action, now!

 

Be sure and give customers several ways to contact the advertiser – toll free phone number, website, e-mail, fax, mail etc. If there’s an offer, make sure there’s an expiration date so customers have to act quickly.

 

Headline:

 

Avoid cute, funny, meaningless gibberish with your headline. It’s too important not to spend time on it. Consider composing your headline by:

1.    Identify a problem

2.    Provide a solution in the form of a benefit

3.    Provide additional incentives to use your product or service right now.

An example might be a dry cleaner who has determined that delivery and same-day service were two big hot-buttons for prospective customers. A good headline might read:

 

Still Waiting for your Dry Cleaning?

ABC Cleaners Will Deliver Your Dry Cleaning Tonight –

Or It’s FREE!

 

Did you know: 90% of advertising contains no headline, even though studies prove headlines can improve response rates up to 2,100%. Source: Guerrilla Marketing Excellence

Action Words

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Bargain
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Big
Call
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Interesting
Largest
Latest
Lifestyle
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Love
Low, Lowest
Now
Outstanding

Painless
Popular
Potential 


Powerful
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You
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Power Phrases – these phrases are hard-wired in the purchasing brain

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Poison Words                             

Bad
Buy
Contract
Cost
Dead
Deal
Death
Fail
Hard
Liability
Loss
Order
Pay
Sell
Wrong
 
   

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